Hook
0:00 - 0:03Hook9w · 180 wpm
Every year, your home needs a dozen different services.
VisualQuick icons or labels for the different jobs a home needs during the year pop up one after another. This sets up the idea that these all cost money, which the next beat adds up.
Problem
0:03 - 0:08Stakes11w · 132 wpm
Add up what they cost you. It's more than you think.
VisualThis is the first intro of the counter. As the voice says 'add up what they cost you,' the costs stack up and a number counter climbs on screen. It stops on $1,178, what a homeowner already spends in a year. Use this exact same counter later when we add and stack the included value from the 6 services he's offering.
They should look and feel like the same object, because this early number is the problem and the saving of paying for a pass is the answer to it later.
0:08 - 0:13Stakes12w · 144 wpm
And next year, you do it all again. Full price, every time.
VisualSomething that makes the viewer feel the burden of paying this every year.
Solution
0:13 - 0:18Reveal12w · 144 wpm
That's why we built Home Service Pass. All your home services. One pass.
VisualThis is the first time we show the app. Phone floating on screen with the logo on it, kept simple and clean so people instantly get that it's an app. Maybe a few clean pieces of the dashboard components or service icons hover on around or on the sides of the floating phone.
0:18 - 0:22The offer10w · 150 wpm
Your membership includes six home services at no additional cost.
VisualThis part is carried mostly by bringing the counter back. But with each service quickly appearing on the screen one after the other.
As each one lands, a single running value counter (in the corner, or wherever looks best) keeps climbing.
The counter shows the running total, not a price on each service.
- Pest Control
- Window Washing
- Home Cleaning
- Carpet Cleaning
- Bin Cleaning
- Garage Door Tune-Up
(Each have a green checkmark 'INCLUDED' badge.)
The counter continues increasining until it lands on "$1,178 included value"
0:22 - 0:29The value stackSilent (visual)
No narration.
VisualSpace to breathe and visualize the value comparison.
The counter climbs and stops on '$1,178 Included Value.' Hold there a moment, then the number drops down to the price of the home service pass ($349).
0:29 - 0:32Value landsSilent (breathe)
No narration.
VisualThe gap between the two numbers (what they WOULD be paying, and the price of the Pass) is the whole point.
*Keep the services and the final number easy to edit/change for other future iterations.
(the price may change / the six free services could become seven if another one is added in the future).*
0:32 - 0:36The point9w · 135 wpm
The membership can pay for itself, on day one.
VisualSmall pause in the voiceover between 'itself' and 'on day one.'
By now, the price is already on screen from the counter dropping ($1,178 down to about $349), so when the voice says 'pays for itself' .
it should be complimented with a way to visualize/introduce that this $349 is the member pass. (maybe a card or UI component).
0:36 - 0:39Expansion intro5w · 100 wpm
But that's only the beginning.
Visual
0:39 - 0:46The expansion13w · 111 wpm
Every other job your home needs. All year. At prices the public can't get.
VisualA fast burst of more service categories filling the screen one after another:
- HVAC,
- Electrical
- Roofing
- Concrete
- Painting
- Flooring
- Plumbing
- Landscaping
- Windows
- Home Security
- Interior Design
- Automotive
- Pet Services
ending on
-'and more.'
The point is to show how many different kinds of jobs are covered.
0:46 - 0:50The perks7w · 105 wpm
Plus, exclusive member perks that keep adding up.
VisualThe member perks stack up on screen one by one:
- Priority Scheduling
- Complimentary Consultations
- Preferred Member Pricing
- Exclusive Upgrades
- Seasonal Promotions
- Member-Only Offers.
STILL TO DECIDE: do we show these as clean text and icons we design, or as recreated versions of the real cards in the app (the app shows things like 'concrete up to $1,000 off + priority scheduling')
Demo
0:50 - 0:58The app17w · 128 wpm
Everything you need, all in one place. Choose the service you want, and connect with a trusted provider in minutes.
VisualFrom the customer's point of view, a quick booking flow.
Can show the booking page or a minimal view of the 'Book' flow.
And a quick app notification sliding down from the top saying
'Your Pest Control Service Is Scheduled,' with a soft chime and maybe a doorbell right after so the moment feels satisfying and instant.
Proof
0:58 - 1:02Proof12w · 144 wpm
A growing network of trusted local professionals and nationally recognized home-service brands.
VisualSprinkle in positive / five-star reviews as quick flashes surrounding the home services pro logo in the middle
- "It's a no-brainer."
- "Paid for itself in minutes."
- 'Best app for your home."
- "Wish I knew about this sooner."
Ask
1:02 - 1:07The ask13w · 130 wpm
Join Home Service Pass today. Download the app. Unlock a smarter way to care for your home.
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